Illuminous

Steps down to the shore
I am instantly drawn
like Icarus to the sun,
a few missed calls from you
but I throw back on the sand
a freed state of mind has begun,
daylight stars glistening on the water,
the heat sunken onto my skin
by the waves I am pulled in,
a few missed calls from you
but the sound in the shells
is more illuminous than your voice
and I want the whole ocean
to know me by name and by mind,
Steps down to the shore
I am nowhere else but here
and coming up for air
feels so natural
in this light

 

15 Comments

  1. Steph

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    Princess

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    1. Thank you !! I certainly will:)
      Glad you are liking what you are reading so far!

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