You say I am
tenacious
too much
for my own good,
Holding firm
to all of my ideals
let them go,
I never would.
You say I am
persistent
unwavering
immovable
inexorable
in my existence
but because of that
you listen,
to help make sense
of you.
Here in my
relentlessness,
you
are understood.
elenaxtina
Poetry & Memoirs
I loved this poem :) and really resonated with the last line: “Here in my relentlessness, you
are understood.” Well done :) Greetings, Sam :)
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Thank you Sam :) Glad you enjoyed it! Look forward to reading your posts :)
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I was going to comment on exactly the same line :)
Its not often I read something so weighty put so simply, while maintaining its originality; a true skill
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Wow thank you Joseph that’s an amazing compliment! glad you enjoyed this :)
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Elena, I can relate to your poem. For me it talks of the courage to be fully who we are. Thank you for your poetry.
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Thank you Roland ! I love the way you interpret this :)
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beautiful!
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Thank you!!
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Great I’ll check when I reach my mac !
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You say it nicely. Will have to return to read more of your interesting verse. Peace.
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Thank you :)
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